The Rose Greets the Dawn

The rose greets the dawn
softly the breeze reassures...
Dewy tears consoled

© Harry J Horsman  2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 12:11 AM
Revisiting this one. such a gem. I'm still on that first page of yours way in the back!!
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December 8, 2012 at 7:12 PM
re-reading this one again... a nice greeting image..i love it...PD
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September 13, 2010 at 9:31 AM
A lovely view, with a sad smoothing morning! Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 9:49 PM
soft and enchanting. LUv, Andrea
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July 5, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Liked this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on your contest win. Sorry I'm so late but I just can't keep up with all these contests. Keep up the good writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen
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June 24, 2010 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "The natural Thing to Do". Love, Carol
Harrison Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 5:03 PM
Beautiful haiku, Harry!
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June 15, 2010 at 7:20 AM
Really a great Haiku, Harry! Enjoyed reading it and congrats on your fifth place in the contest! Tanks for your kind comment on 'Lost Stars' and have agreat time...Gert
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June 15, 2010 at 3:58 AM
Savour your fifth place tie in my contest charles
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June 14, 2010 at 12:46 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.- Charles
Muzzey Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Great Haiku! Caryl
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June 14, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Karen
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June 14, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Excellent haiku, Harry. Beautifully written, especially the last line. Love, Carolyn
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June 14, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Awesome work, I like it. Best haiku I've ever read
Pattison Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Nice write, good choice of words. Gavin.
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June 14, 2010 at 7:30 AM
great write, enjoyed!!
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