The Rose Garden

They say there is a rose garden that blooms inside us now and again.
I remember how your breath was so sweet I wanted to swallow it
Whole – gobbling up your gasping wind – to drown my screaming
Passion, ignited by your soft molasses coated tongue, with the scent of rose
Blossoming inside me, where my blood rushed your love home – yes!
      Later I thought how strange it was, that it could last for so long, with me, 
Still breathing after you had left – for three days – I was exhaling your fumes! 
But, that memory was not distressing, no! Mildly hallucinogenic; it was swirling	
There in my blood, like the alcohol that washes away your scent – sometimes – 
Life is like searching a beer garden for a bottle of aphrodisiac potion you’ve lost.
      What’s more troubling is that all the other flowers continue to bloom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 10:39 AM
This beautiful romantic piece has touch my heart and soul! It's a 7! Well done! Pandita
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April 2, 2014 at 5:39 PM
HI MICHAEL, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda
Dome Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 6:59 AM
Such a wonderful write Michel. well expressed. Well done. best wishes. Pete.
Dom Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 11:01 PM
Thanks&cheers Pete.
Mehta Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 1:41 AM
Beautiful imagery and nice take, congrats on the fine win, michael
Dom Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 2:59 AM
Dr Mehta, my thanks&cheers.
Deschler Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 6:11 PM
A very passionate write. The emotion was expressed so well here. A great poem, Michael! Congratulations on your win!
Dom Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Hi Kelly, thanks for the visit and congratulations on your recent wins as well. Cheers!
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 7:46 AM
- Find peace and serenity in your beautiful rose garden - thank you, a lovely poem Michael :) - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dom Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 2:24 AM
Hey Ann-Lise, thank you for the good wishes and your visit. Yours is a fine heart "Good wishes I send you in my heart".
Guzzi Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 8:44 AM
I really loved the content here and it is indeed Prose poetry. The change up of the garden inside rather than is refreshing. The unaccustomed use of words like gobbling with the added alliteration of gasping was perfect. The end is also perfect. Do consider taking a second look at the punctuation. THANK YOU for the lovely poem you left me :) Light & Love
Dom Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Cheers&thanks Debbie.
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