The Rose and the Daffodil - For Food For Thought Contest

Foreword: on 30 December 2018 one last straggling rose remained in my garden. Below it a daffodil flower was just splitting, ready to open. Now that can’t be right.


The Rose And The Daffodil

The rose and the daffodil never should meet
Although one will grow at the other one’s feet
In some proper climate there just isn’t room
For a daffodil flower to watch a rose bloom

When summers were cradled by May and September
Roses we saw and daffs we’d remember
But now daffs and roses are blooming together
Unthinking we welcome this disjointed splendour

In the March I once knew, a new spring was due
And September’s autumn saw leaves change their hue
But the rose a contender to see off November
While daffodils open to brighten December

The holiday maker sunbathes with the masses
Worrying not about copious gasses
That pour from the engines of passenger jets
For sun, sea and sand is as good as it gets

The vomit of commerce the cities spew out
While making the stuff that we can’t do without
So many products that make our today
That factories make and we throw away

But no workshop makes us a shiny new climate
It’s future so finite a human could time it
Perhaps we should worry about our forever
When the rose and the daffodil flower together



4 January 2019
For: Food for Thought Contest
Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lawless Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 7:58 AM
A deftly woven indictment......Congrats on your placement
Flood Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 10:55 AM
Thankyou John.
Raven Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Hi Terry, dropping by with my congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful piece. Well-deserved my friend. Have a wonderful Monday....Mike.
Flood Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Thank muchly Mike. You too.
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:39 PM
- A great win, big congratulations Terry :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Flood Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:58 PM
Thankyou Anne-Lise.
One Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 10:27 AM
This is a great take on the contest, asa gardnerer, I have seen this also... I still have roses blooming.. But not very well.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Flood Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Thanks Silent One, we don’t have a lot of roses in bloom, but we do have three or four buds just opening.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 6:24 PM
Awesome poem, Terry, with much to ponder!
Flood Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 8:18 PM
Thankyou Kim... there’s some weird stuff going on on planet Earth right now.
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