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The Rose

The thorns over grown and tough
Rip the flesh from her aging skin
Difficult as the chore may be
She prunes where others haven't been


Deep in thought as she does the job
Gloved hands remove the shoots
A distant glance shows a good change
Tender young parts buried take root


Some say she's too old for change
Just let the thick thorns remain
Time will tell if she did well
And if the pruning's healed the pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kiser Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 2:17 AM
Smooth, beautifully penned; had to fav'it.
Kendrick Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 6:07 AM
M.L., I am delighted that you found this one suited to your fav's list..Thanks for all of your visits to my page each time you take time to comment lifts my spirit..Sara
Turner Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 7:54 PM
Tender Loving care, Mrs Sara. So nice:)
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 11:51 AM
- Yes, time will tell ... beautiful poem,Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Thanks so much for stopping by..I appreciate your kind review..Sara
Salehi Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Indeed... Very nice Sara
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Thanks for the kind review..Your presence is appreciated at my work..Sara
Horne Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 4:08 PM
love this gardening gem - I can picture you pruning as I read this
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 5:03 PM
AHHH!! Thanks for the kind review..I can't do much out in the garden anymore..I just don't have the stamina anymore..Sara
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