The Rose

Came close to the rose 
Too much busy in blooming ...
My crestfallen doors
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16/02/2017

feelingssenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

February 19, 2017 at 7:01 PM

Nice one, Probir. A good contrast in it.

Probir Gupta

February 20, 2017 at 2:09 AM

Thank you, Andrea ... For some there is a continuity ... For some others a contrast ... !

Nette Onclaud

February 19, 2017 at 8:43 AM

how you glow with this blooming senryu--well done, probir..huggs

Probir Gupta

February 19, 2017 at 9:54 AM

Thank you ...

Arthur Vaso

February 18, 2017 at 10:41 PM

beautiful one!

Probir Gupta

February 18, 2017 at 11:06 PM

Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues

February 18, 2017 at 8:30 AM

Love your senryu! Seems to express much!

Probir Gupta

February 18, 2017 at 8:39 AM

Haboob's quick and lovely response for the Rose , far away from the sand storm , is indeed beautiful ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

February 16, 2017 at 10:33 AM

I too once had much difficulty in understanding short poetry, but over time, I began to grasp it w/clarity. It likes reading shorthand. Deciphering the shortened expressions requires repeated use of linguistic skills. Love this poem though, Probir. Peace and joy and love to you always.

Probir Gupta

February 17, 2017 at 7:13 AM

Thank you ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

February 16, 2017 at 10:30 AM

The object desired yet denied. Such is life. A marvelous poem, Probir. Very thoughtful and so filled w/humanity. Excellent write ... a well-deserved 7. Love and peace, my friend.

Probir Gupta

February 17, 2017 at 7:14 AM

Yes ... Thank you ...