The Rose

Came close to the rose Too much busy in blooming ... My crestfallen doors ___________________________________ 16/02/2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2017 7:01:00 PM

Nice one, Probir. A good contrast in it.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2017 2:09:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea ... For some there is a continuity ... For some others a contrast ... !

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/19/2017 8:43:00 AM

how you glow with this blooming senryu--well done, probir..huggs

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/19/2017 9:54:00 AM

Thank you ...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/18/2017 10:41:00 PM

beautiful one!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2017 11:06:00 PM

Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/18/2017 8:30:00 AM

Love your senryu! Seems to express much!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2017 8:39:00 AM

Haboob's quick and lovely response for the Rose , far away from the sand storm , is indeed beautiful ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/16/2017 10:33:00 AM

I too once had much difficulty in understanding short poetry, but over time, I began to grasp it w/clarity. It likes reading shorthand. Deciphering the shortened expressions requires repeated use of linguistic skills. Love this poem though, Probir. Peace and joy and love to you always.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/17/2017 7:13:00 AM

Thank you ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/16/2017 10:30:00 AM

The object desired yet denied. Such is life. A marvelous poem, Probir. Very thoughtful and so filled w/humanity. Excellent write ... a well-deserved 7. Love and peace, my friend.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/17/2017 7:14:00 AM

Yes ... Thank you ...