Jacob Frey Poet Lyric

The Rose

Bright, is the future of thee, 
as bright as the northern star 
you shine through the night in perfect harmony
a beautiful blooming rose, you are. 
When thinking of purity, you are what I see. 
A fragile but strong-willed child, left unable to mar. 
You love others; you never show animosity. 
So, I presume with you I'll stay, 
for you changed me, and saved me from the day.
Thank you for the love you gave to me, 
now my days will be bright, no longer gray.

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Jacob Frey November 18, 2014 at 10:39 AM Thank you, and once again I appreciate the comment. I believe love is one of the most beautiful things in the world, so in order to write about it, it has to be as beautiful as one can possibly make it.

Carol Eastman November 18, 2014 at 9:39 AM Beautifully written... I see the romantic in you clearly thru these words.