The Rose

Once bloomed a rose so young and fair
With dark brown eyes and long black hair

Beside her be a tall dark tree
Whose branches stretch to smother thee

Too close beside the shadowy bark
That soon begins to leave its mark

She cries for help, but none shall hear
Her thorns too sharp, who’d dare go near?

To save this rose, who’d risk their life?
With naught to gain but pain and strife

Alone, afraid, she lays to rest
Her heart beats low inside her chest

And with the hour growing near
She sheds her final grieving tear

And so the rose soon falls asunder
Her final day, eternal slumber

She lies beside the old dark tree
The only one who mourns for thee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cooper Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:35 PM
great write, but you spelled mourn wrong. Not to be harsh here but you might get docked for that in the contest. congrats too for making it to the first round.
Hernandez Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Thanks for catching that, I do believe its fixed. (^_^)
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Nina. Love Carol
Hernandez Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 3:43 PM
Thank you Carol (^_^)
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations Nina on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
Hernandez Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 10:23 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured Nina!
Hernandez Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 3:43 PM
Thank sis love you!
Ruebel Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Hello Nina, Beautiful and so well written. So glad I happened to stop by. Hope your week is wonderful and full of love and inspiration. As Always, Shar
Hernandez Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 3:42 PM
Thank you so very much Sharon (^__^)
Gould Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Powerful
Hernandez Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 3:44 PM
Thank you very much Erica (^_^)
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