The Room: Part One

Quiet room, perhaps
The hammering of keyboards
Talking at the back


(By Peter Thomas and Dan Keir)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 2:32 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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May 26, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Peter, awesome senryu
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March 11, 2013 at 6:40 AM
Ah yes but peter... what colour are the desks? Do they remind you of any household everyday foodstuff? the great souper T. Hyam has written a poem on this that I belive is tangential in meaning to this poem. Read it. It reflects well, yes???? xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo x
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