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The Room: Part One

Quiet room, perhaps The hammering of keyboards Talking at the back (By Peter Thomas and Dan Keir)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/26/2015 4:49:00 PM
Peter, awesome senryu
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Date: 3/11/2013 6:40:00 AM
Ah yes but peter... what colour are the desks? Do they remind you of any household everyday foodstuff? the great souper T. Hyam has written a poem on this that I belive is tangential in meaning to this poem. Read it. It reflects well, yes???? xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo x
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