The Rollercoaster

I waited in the line until it was my turn.
I was fearful and I wondered, if it was going to burn.
Still you fastened me in tight and then you took my hand.
I closed my eyes and then we rolled in Never-ever-land.
I loved it when we climbed that hill.
My stomach churned as time stood still.
Around the curve, we began to swerve .
I felt so excited, elated and delighted.
We were upside down and round and round.
As we reached the peak I could hardly speak.
Racing ever faster, you became my master.
Then as we slowed down I noticed the tracks.
I don't understand how I fell through the cracks.
It was the ride of my life, that I must say,
but I never went back for ten years and one day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Callus Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 6:08 AM
I like your life experience metaphor, Angela. After euphoria, the meltdown... Regards // paul
Crabtree Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 10:27 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Bangalee Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 1:54 AM
nice to read.....sometimes highest earning of life also falls down
Crabtree Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 10:43 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting :)
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