The Rocking Chair That Keeps

The Rocking Chair That Keeps…

Up in the attic, there’s something or someone 
that keeps creating an eerie, dreary air: 

for the darkness is greedy
as it smothers a world of mystery,
a century of family history,
all boxed and cased
in a crust of rust and dust!
Pictures of Dad as a sprightly lad,
Gran with no wrinkle, just a youthful twinkle
and bits of me bagged and forgotten.
However, it is the empty, rocking chair
that reaches out with a squeeze of….. unease.

Yes, up in the attic, there’s something or someone
that offers, a bite of fright and a dreaded dare: 

as pipes snake into secret, cobwebbed lairs
and wooden beams stream like overhead train lines
while the excitement of discovery hides in the past.
But it is the empty, rocking chair
that grips and grabs at my attention
as I sense ‘something’ harbouring its wooden frame. 

Oh yes, up in the attic, there’s something or someone
that keeps, nudging and grudging with a gloomed glare:

the room suddenly trembles, my heart holds tight
but it’s only the wind galloping by at night.
Immediately a watery giggle, 
gurgles the length of a pipe
increasing my midgets of fidgets.
I turn and an aged mirror offers a face of fear
but I breathe again – for it has only borrowed mine.

Up in the attic, there’s definitely something or someone
that keeps, me uneasy, even queasy, each time I am there:

for the darkness is greedy
as it smothers a world of mystery,
a century of family history,
all boxed and cased
in a crust of rust and dust!
But now…. something far more shocking,
a lone rocking chair that keeps.…rocking!


Ian Souter 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/22/2025 11:44:00 AM
Ian, Such an interesting theme in an attic. This poem rocks. -Richard
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Ian Souter
Date: 8/22/2025 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Richard! Glad it rocks your socks! Ian
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