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The Road

Dark stripe night-like silvery shadow, Bottom of an earthen pot of a kind, Hallowed sepia-eyes of Black Dahlia in her dying glow Expressway etched intaglio, Through miles of my crazy driving mind, It is dawn, Under a cloud, peeps the sun, While morning dew is still fresh, On the leafy flesh, In front lies my life, The sesame yawning road doses starving, It is the day of my harvest moon And i must be home, To reap the corn of lonely broken hearted living, Embarking on a journey to build my hope, On the beyond stubbles of life, By loosely trailing on so labyrinthine along a strange rope, Where will this romance With the Anaconda leads? Maybe destined like the road to somewhere leads, When will this sojouner comes to the remembrance And comes to the crossroads, Of life's all unending trods? Helplessly! my days keep throwing up the sponge, When will i plunge Into the mirage ocean, Of oblivion? This road leads To the sleepy lull, This road leads To the seraphic soul, Over the lily covered Hilly Down the unbeknownst far fir forested valley, It goes on eternally.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/17/2011 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations on this most poetic writing. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/15/2011 2:00:00 PM
Congratulatons on the well deserved win in the contest,Afolabi
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Date: 1/15/2011 11:21:00 AM
Congrats Afolabi on your well deserved win in this contest!
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Date: 1/15/2011 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations Afolabi to you for your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Foreign Exchange". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2011 2:54:00 AM
afolabi.. so liking this with all its charm.. CONGRATS to you! :) nette
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:04:00 PM
Congrats Afolabi on your wonderful win in Debbie's contest with this exciting entry .. enjoy your special win with luv..
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Date: 1/14/2011 2:25:00 PM
Dear new poet friend, an EXCELLENT write, yet...you didn't put where you were writing from? [fret] had you, you would have been in the top 10! NO MATTER! Congrad's and keep writing these jewels. Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2011 6:29:00 AM
So very interesting! NEW imagery Thanks so much for the entry please just note for us what country you are writing from? Since we can not see your flag when we read the verse. Light & Love
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Date: 12/31/2010 6:12:00 PM
Afolabi, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2010 12:53:00 PM
Interesting descriptive work..Congratulations on your work being featured this week..Sara
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Date: 12/28/2010 7:41:00 AM
Excellent write you have here my brother... i love every line of this poem.. Well written and very precise... Let me hear more from you....
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:14:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Afolabi. Love, Carol
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