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The River Line

Majestic river tumbles down gleaming glorious in dawn's rise. Herons surface glossed in onyx sprayed by cascades of polished jade, and I curl boughs in pleats canopied wild on bank of prayers rolling to meet sea. Written 2/26/17 for the River Line Contest

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Date: 3/29/2017 8:48:00 AM
Hi Rhonda. Congrats for your well-deserved third placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 3/20/2017 8:23:00 PM
A well deserved win, congrats Rhonda
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Date: 3/20/2017 2:56:00 PM
My wife's favorite one :) congrats on a well deserved win!
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Date: 3/19/2017 1:48:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Rhonda. : ) This poem is non-stop with goodness.
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Date: 3/19/2017 8:01:00 AM
Well done Rhonda, congratulations...
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Date: 3/18/2017 5:19:00 PM
A wonderful array of beautiful images Rhonda.
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Date: 3/2/2017 6:25:00 AM
Lovely!
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Date: 2/27/2017 5:03:00 PM
For sure this one will win. Splendid , Rhonda.
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Date: 2/27/2017 3:47:00 PM
What a wonderful image you weave in this excellent poem, Rhonda! Should do well in the contest :)
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Date: 2/27/2017 11:08:00 AM
This was beautiful and wonderfully written. You have capture the serenity and the comfort that comes to the mind when embracing a scene such as this and done so following the guidelines of the contest. Amazing Rhonda.
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Date: 2/27/2017 1:32:00 AM
"Herons surfave glossed in onyx" That's one beautiful image you paint for me in a great contest poem. Good luck!
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Date: 2/26/2017 11:02:00 PM
Ooh! Whoo! Ya got me! Darn good, Rhonda!! : )
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