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The River Line

The river line a source of death When old Pappy fell in, drowned… The river line an ugly place Remembering Pappy screaming… But once you discard that murderer’s coat The beauty of a killer – astounding…

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Date: 2/26/2017 8:22:00 AM
"Astounding..." Not necessarily wonderfully astounding, but astounding in a grim yet respectable way.
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J. Amorose
Date: 2/26/2017 7:06:00 PM
I was thinking the same thing. Thanks for the comment! (Looking for critiques, especially on my newer poems) ~Blue

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