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The River

transporters rely
travelers’ way to survive
grave in water world









Copyright2016Leonora Galinta
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May 13, 2015



 -a river (like in my place ) where people travel everyday by boat

riverhaiku

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Sara Kendrick

July 22, 2016 at 5:58 PM

Good work..I enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Len Gasun

July 23, 2016 at 9:47 PM

thank you so much as well my dear Sara. it was my pleasure to drop by and read your poem. have a great weekend! hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

June 4, 2016 at 9:08 PM

the ending is sad. I think it would be cool to see the people of your place.

Len Gasun

June 5, 2016 at 8:28 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Andrea. Cool to see the thai people here my dear friend! Have a great Sunday/weekend! Hugs!

Bl Devnath

June 4, 2016 at 1:39 PM

Beautiful poem my lovely friend reminds me the picture of the river Bhahmaputra i enjoyed during my early life. Lovely picture. Loved always, bl

Len Gasun

June 5, 2016 at 8:27 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, BL!Have a great Sunday/weekend! Hugs!

Paul Callus

June 4, 2016 at 11:04 AM

A nice poem that describes rivers the way you see them in everyday life. Many are those whose jobs rely on them. Unfortunately in Malta we have no rivers, but at least we have the sea all around us to make up for it! ~ Warm regards and hugs to you, dear Leonora. // paul

Len Gasun

June 5, 2016 at 8:22 AM

Thank you my dear friend, Paul. Have a great weekend/Sunday! Hugs!

Funom Makama

May 30, 2016 at 11:29 AM

Great write, beautiful lines. A well deserved 7

Len Gasun

June 4, 2016 at 4:50 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Funom for taking some of your precious time reading my poem and your inspiring/encouraging accolade! Big hugs!

Royal Ninja

May 22, 2016 at 10:15 PM

I have yet to get on a boat I think I have a phobia of just falling off ... I appreciate the read :)

Len Gasun

May 29, 2016 at 8:43 AM

I've got phobia of riding a boat too my dearest one. Tytysmm for the read and hugs back at you. I'll be back soon , God bless!

Len Gasun

May 29, 2016 at 8:38 AM

Thank you so much for taking your precious time to read my poem my dearest Royal. Sorry for just coming only now because I was super duper busy then 'till now, weekend but i need to stop by for a while to say thank you before I proceed to the many assignments entrusted to me this coming week. I will come back soon to read from you and others here. I promise. Sending my love to you and the whole family. A blessed weekend!