The River

the river beautiful deep green water.. summer fun beside the river a picnic... biting flies hungry
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Duncan Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Very nice write Sara :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 8:14 PM
A cute scene you painted for a river side picnic!
Hamilton Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 4:28 AM
as you know I prefer traditional Haiku yet the beauty of your poem beguiles the senses Sara great pen 7
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 2:02 AM
Sara, a joyful scene!!! weeee, next week we will be having a short picnic!!!~Olive Eloisa =')
Onclaud Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 3:44 PM
so well expressed, sara.. your river runs deep.. lovely!..huggs
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 2:46 PM
lovely imagery Sara - oh I can especially relate to the second one - if they don't bite me they land on my food lol:-) hugs jan xx7
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