The Risk of Love

THE   RISK  OF  LOVE  


It was a hostile land in those days, singing
Of our dream of a house, clinging 
To something we could believe in,
Rooted in the soft rocks so that even
The breath of the earth itself was muffled.
Precarious, tenacious, cliff-edged  -
Dwelling there for three score years of nights
And never a pause taking from its delights;
Never choosing to deny the thrill of waking,
Or surrendering our siren-held souls, or shaking
Off our thraldom.  'Twas the perfect foil
To the ever-present harshness and soil
Of the reality on solid ground.

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Written   11 th   August  2014

For Shadow Hamilton's Contest...chosen theme  is "Taking Risks"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:17 AM
Lovely take on the theme of taking risk, Sidney. congrats
A. Sharma Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Congrats on awesome winning write Sidney!
A   Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 9:08 PM
sweet win Sidney...Linda
Smith Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Congrats my friend... Cheers
Gibson Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:25 PM
Beautiful write, Sidney; a well deserving win. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:09 PM
many congratulations on this excellent write:-) Hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:59 PM
superb Sidney congrats on 2nd place with this deep pen hugs
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 5:40 PM
wow, you are always amazing when you write of deep stuff like this. I could not even think of what to write about for her. You took it to a new level.
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