The Risk of Love

THE   RISK  OF  LOVE  


It was a hostile land in those days, singing
Of our dream of a house, clinging 
To something we could believe in,
Rooted in the soft rocks so that even
The breath of the earth itself was muffled.
Precarious, tenacious, cliff-edged  -
Dwelling there for three score years of nights
And never a pause taking from its delights;
Never choosing to deny the thrill of waking,
Or surrendering our siren-held souls, or shaking
Off our thraldom.  'Twas the perfect foil
To the ever-present harshness and soil
Of the reality on solid ground.

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Written   11 th   August  2014

For Shadow Hamilton's Contest...chosen theme  is "Taking Risks"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/16/2014 1:17:00 AM
Lovely take on the theme of taking risk, Sidney. congrats
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Date: 8/15/2014 11:07:00 PM
Congrats on awesome winning write Sidney!
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Date: 8/15/2014 9:08:00 PM
sweet win Sidney...Linda
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Date: 8/15/2014 3:05:00 PM
Congrats my friend... Cheers
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:25:00 PM
Beautiful write, Sidney; a well deserving win. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:09:00 PM
many congratulations on this excellent write:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2014 1:59:00 PM
superb Sidney congrats on 2nd place with this deep pen hugs
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Date: 8/10/2014 5:40:00 PM
wow, you are always amazing when you write of deep stuff like this. I could not even think of what to write about for her. You took it to a new level.
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