The Ring and the Violets
The ring and the violet represent, love
Happiness, and careness.
Extraordinary our love shall be.
Reply to my love with a yes.
I imagine you in your beautiful dress
Nervous to death I am, by
Giving you this ring i mean nothing but respect.
Allow sometime for your response.
Never have i
Dreamed of finding anyone like you.
The meaningful flower that my lover requests.
Hoping to find the precious violet.
Eagerly i call every store to find this beauty.
Violets i have found, finally
i have finished my search, for
Only the best my
Love deserves.
Exited and nervous i am.
To finally give my love what she wants
Surprisingly happy she is to see my solicitation and with a ____ she ends my quest
this is a poem that i made for this very important girl that i am going to propose so please
criticize harshly i want to make it the best it can be please help me make this perfect for her
=)
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