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The Ring and the Violets

The ring and the violet represent, love Happiness, and careness. Extraordinary our love shall be. Reply to my love with a yes. I imagine you in your beautiful dress Nervous to death I am, by Giving you this ring i mean nothing but respect. Allow sometime for your response. Never have i Dreamed of finding anyone like you. The meaningful flower that my lover requests. Hoping to find the precious violet. Eagerly i call every store to find this beauty. Violets i have found, finally i have finished my search, for Only the best my Love deserves. Exited and nervous i am. To finally give my love what she wants Surprisingly happy she is to see my solicitation and with a ____ she ends my quest this is a poem that i made for this very important girl that i am going to propose so please criticize harshly i want to make it the best it can be please help me make this perfect for her =)

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Date: 10/16/2010 7:47:00 PM
I love it but your younger than me and I'm turning 17 in december Josh.... But I hope she says yes! =>
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:10:00 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Josh. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Let us know what she says. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2010 8:21:00 PM
perfect ..... x sarah x
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Date: 10/14/2010 4:56:00 PM
Read like you care very much..Sara
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Date: 10/14/2010 4:37:00 PM
i wish i was in your blue shoes x
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