The Right Path

The Right Path

I will
follow the path
you have laid out for me 
if I wish to succeed, I have
no choice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 3:01 PM
We have a choice, to go off the rails…but in the end it is just a bad choice! Enjoyed!
Mckeithan Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 3:56 PM
Yep. If one wants to succeed God's path is the best. Thanks Kim
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Perfect. I love it. Well said :)
Mckeithan Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 4:04 AM
Thanks much Heidi.
Tor Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 1:31 AM
Great message here my friend. Stick to his word and you will forever be protected and rewarded, God bless you...
Mckeithan Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 4:04 AM
Absolutely. Thank you Michael. God bless you as well
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