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The Right Answer

Caught a whisper in the breeze, asked the whisper what's your name. It answered softly my names Forever. I said how sweet do you have a surname, the whisper smiled and replied Yours. My heart stopped, “ Forever Yours “

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Date: 2/10/2010 3:41:00 AM
Daniel, That is a beautiful way to express love. Have you ever entered any of the Hallmark poetry contests? Perhaps you should. You have a beautiful and original style. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/7/2010 1:57:00 PM
Outstandingly beautiful,going to my fav,very Romatique:)tres jolie..Charma
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Date: 2/6/2010 10:02:00 AM
Imaginative write.. u do capture the reader's attention quickly and retain it .. I always enjoy your reads.. luv.. and thankxxx for all the special comments u posted on my poetry "beauties" .. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/6/2010 9:58:00 AM
Beautiful play on words in this Valentine. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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