The Right Answer

Caught a whisper in the breeze, asked
the whisper what's your name. It
answered softly my names Forever. I
said how sweet do you have a surname,
the whisper smiled and replied Yours.
My heart stopped, “ Forever Yours “
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 3:41 AM
Daniel, That is a beautiful way to express love. Have you ever entered any of the Hallmark poetry contests? Perhaps you should. You have a beautiful and original style. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Chircop Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 1:57 PM
Outstandingly beautiful,going to my fav,very Romatique:)tres jolie..Charma
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Imaginative write.. u do capture the reader's attention quickly and retain it .. I always enjoy your reads.. luv.. and thankxxx for all the special comments u posted on my poetry "beauties" .. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Beautiful play on words in this Valentine. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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