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The Right and Wrong

a choice in life whether easy or hard, challenges our minds before we give the nod, it may be sharing a toy as a child, or charmed into love hate marriage beguiled, many moments in life need a coin toss, seeking head or tail for a win or loss! journey sometimes in to unknown terrain, lets frivolous fate decide future gain! and that day I walked away from her, sobbing she stood holding my last letter, the bright Sun that evening shone dark for me, our hopes died and two hearts did not agree, simple problem made complex by my pride, should have apologised, let kiss decide, drowned in remorse she chose to be alone, would have gone back to her If I had known! love screams in my heart on a silent night, wish I could turn back the clock - make it right! 2nd Placement Written 21/11/2020 Juxtaposition poetry contest Silent One sponsored 18 lines 10syllables each line PS syllable counter

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Date: 11/29/2020 11:03:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Juxtaposition contest, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/29/2020 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! Much appreciated!!:)
Date: 11/26/2020 7:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Krish. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/26/2020 9:47:00 PM
Thanks eve!! :)
Date: 11/25/2020 9:52:00 PM
Congrats Krish....you are so right many moments in life do need a coin toss.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/25/2020 9:56:00 PM
Thank you Carol! I am pleased I came up ‘heads’ here! :)
Date: 11/25/2020 12:40:00 PM
Congrats Krish on your win in Silent's contest. Well done.
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Date: 11/25/2020 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Vijay! Greetings and congrats to you on your win! Best wishes
Date: 11/25/2020 10:01:00 AM
Hi Krish, Good use of juxtaposition in this heartfelt write. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/25/2020 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Alexis! Pleased it was placed! ‘Silent’ always stimulates good poetry out of the contestants!
Date: 11/25/2020 7:07:00 AM
Great use of juxtaposition here and sadly we cant turn back the clock.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/25/2020 7:28:00 AM
Thanks Silent! I enjoyed writing it and happy it had a placement! Thanks once again for organising this contest!:)
Date: 11/23/2020 4:55:00 AM
Oh such a sad story Krishji... Well done.. Best wishes.. Have a great day ~ Ani
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/23/2020 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Ani, a relationship break up is very painful and one most have experienced in half or full measure! Stay safe and well during these difficult times!
Date: 11/22/2020 8:11:00 PM
Brilliant juxtaposition, Krish... And yes 'Apologize, let the kiss decide.' Words of wisdom there. Luck and Love, Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/22/2020 9:35:00 PM
Thank you Gershon! There is nothing worse in life than to break a heart!!

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