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The Rhythm

Water droplets slips through leaf follows the rhythm, of my heartbeats.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/25/2015 11:37:00 PM
ASUTOSH:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/22/2015 12:45:00 PM
Love this haiku ... Great job ! ~ lee
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:46:00 PM
Delightful haiku. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 7/20/2015 9:55:00 PM
Short but good! Nicely done.
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Date: 7/20/2015 12:15:00 AM
Hi ASUTOSH.. Your fabulous first write is already being featured this week on the Soup homepage.. Huge congrats and the tip of my hat! -LYRIC
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Date: 7/12/2015 6:50:00 AM
Hi ASUTOSH.. this is a powerful, well constructed write, that I enjoyed reading today! I want to WELCOME you to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. I read a lot of poems and I'm looking forward to checking out more of your works. PS.. If you have a moment, check out my poems as well. I'm looking forward to becoming friends with those who do (Iron sharpens Iron).. Talk soon, LYRIC MAN
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Date: 7/10/2015 1:37:00 AM
Asutosh, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ashutosh Gupta
Date: 7/10/2015 7:59:00 AM
Thanks a lot for such a warm welcome. I am eagerly looking forward to your poetry as well. Cheers :)
Date: 7/8/2015 1:24:00 PM
Ashutosh, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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