The Rhythm

Water droplets slips through leaf
follows the rhythm,
of my heartbeats.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 25, 2015 at 11:37 PM
ASUTOSH:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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July 22, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Love this haiku ... Great job ! ~ lee
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July 21, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Delightful haiku. Congrats on the selection. daver
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 9:55 PM
Short but good! Nicely done.
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July 10, 2015 at 1:37 AM
Asutosh, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 10, 2015 at 7:59 AM
Thanks a lot for such a warm welcome. I am eagerly looking forward to your poetry as well. Cheers :)
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July 8, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Ashutosh, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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