The Return

Promises made on the day he did depart.
After a  long wait in hell.
When his feet touched  familar soil they'd  make a new start.

But time is a empty partner indeed.
Nights turned to endless hours.
And in a moment of weekness  she did concede.

With time and regret so we do learn.
He saw no one waitting.
On the day of his return.

So many happy smilling faces none he did know.
Just strangers in another life.
He just a extra in the background of this  traggic show.

He knew the adress but couldnt reconize  the place.
many storms had passed.
But haunted was the look apon her face.

Tears  and regret over what she had and for
what she did yern.
Victems of time  tears but not of joy.
Shed apon  this sudden return.

Deep within the eyes  thoose old feelings 
almost did shine through.
A confession in pain.When she waved farewell
it was already threw.

A leason of  emptyness two former 
lovers did learn.
Passion like any flame dies.
Leaving only smoke and darkness
to greet you apon your return.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 2:25 PM
Really like the last stanza, first, second and third lines. Keep writing. Sara
Richards Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Such a sad ending to this..a melancholy piece so well written. Carrie
Chircop Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 1:32 PM
i hate the fact that passion wont last forever....yes many times it dies,yet knowing that passion dies when one finds it,one must treasure it and try to keep the flame burning..with time and regret we learn--yes love that verse,one of your best poems john going to my favs--charma:)
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