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The Rendezvous

This morning I was dreaming About you inside my veins, Flowing in and out of me Like gravity playing games… Subatomic particles Moving me about, Making me laugh, smile and dance By the light of the moon and shout. With all my subconscious capacities Screaming into pitch-black air; Then waking rather suddenly, finding you No longer there…vanished Into darkness, disappeared Inside my head; but not before The rendezvous did you Leave my lonely bed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/12/2011 5:03:00 PM
Some far out descriptions to add to the fascination of this verse Terry. After all the fantastic action it ends quietly with her gone. You have a way of playing opposites so well. How are you anyway?
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Date: 10/12/2011 4:30:00 PM
I like the way you rhyme your verses. And I think I know the feeling expressed in this one too.
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