The Rendezvous

This morning I was dreaming 
About you inside my veins, 
Flowing in and out of me
Like gravity playing games…
Subatomic particles 
Moving me about, 
Making me laugh, smile and dance 
By the light of the moon and shout.
With all my subconscious capacities
Screaming into pitch-black air;
Then waking rather suddenly, finding you
No longer there…vanished
Into darkness, disappeared 
Inside my head; but not before 
The rendezvous did you
Leave my lonely bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Some far out descriptions to add to the fascination of this verse Terry. After all the fantastic action it ends quietly with her gone. You have a way of playing opposites so well. How are you anyway?
Effendi Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 4:30 PM
I like the way you rhyme your verses. And I think I know the feeling expressed in this one too.
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