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The Rejoicing Past

rainy afternoon 
soccer with boys on the streets 
the windows rejoice


July 6, 2018

Copyright © Probir Gupta | Year Posted 2018

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July 7, 2018 at 6:01 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

July 7, 2018 at 9:44 AM

I love it ~

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 7, 2018 at 9:31 AM

What Andrea said, "COOL KU"! Congrats on your win! xomo :)

July 7, 2018 at 1:10 AM

Many congrats Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Virginia Waters

July 7, 2018 at 12:45 AM

nice - can see this so clearly

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 6, 2018 at 1:21 PM

- Congratulations, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 6, 2018 at 1:16 PM

what a COOL KU!!! Love that last line

July 6, 2018 at 11:50 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Probir, enjoyed your cleverly written haiku. :))

July 6, 2018 at 11:43 AM

The duality of your last line inspires my admiration, Probir. A beautifully expressed haiku! Congratulations on your superb win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

July 6, 2018 at 9:10 AM

Nicely done :-) congratulations on your win hugs Eve

July 6, 2018 at 8:08 AM

Lovely visual, Probir. Congrats on your win.

July 6, 2018 at 7:41 AM

Beautiful! Love the duel meaning of the window! Congrats, my friend!

July 6, 2018 at 2:29 AM

nice contrast between rain, play and cracked glass, probir... greeat work!..huggs

July 6, 2018 at 1:44 AM

Hi PG.. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your well crafted write this evening. I always appreciate the giftings of a pen in the hand of a poet!

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