The Redemption of Sin
Darkland of Redemption
Forsaken in the least
No Friend
No Foul
No Mortal to be bound
Light or Night
Which is right?
A sinner seeks redemption
Before the Baptism of fire
Withen Hell's loving embrace
The Lord's loving Light
Burns the very of Night
Those who ask forgiveness receive
Those who seek Sin beleive
In the end who wins?
Free will created Sin
God abords Sin
Free will created this Hell
From which we gained From God's Eden
Eve, the Mother of Sin did so out of Love
Adem's condemnation is from Trust
And yet are we not meant to Love and Trust God
The Salvation is our condemnation
Who should win>
I'll leave it to you
Mortals Bound and Found
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