The Redemption

"...some birds aren't meant to be caged. Their feathers are just too bright..." - Red, Shawshank Redemption 

He was bound in an iron chain 
For singing song with sad refrain
The sight of truth was then so blind 
And gust of wind was so unkind 

In years that passed, he braved the pain 
He did not long for any gain 
He placed the fate of his salvation 
In hands of time and sound volition 

The fine bird then, hidden from light 
Pounced its wings when time was right 
For the gleam of its golden glow 
Was not meant in cage of snow 

Any bird that shines so bright 
Will cast its blaze when held so tight 
For, it was meant to show its flow 
For the amber wind to blow 

May 4, 2023 

A Brian Strand Premiere No 1215 Poetry Contest (8th place) 
Sponsored By: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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May 11, 2023 at 2:33 PM
In this outstanding piece, hauntingly stunning Imagery communicates stunning sceneries. Very well done, Paige. Congrats on your win, my friend.
Roger  Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 5:58 PM
Thank you very much, my friend...
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May 11, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations on your win Roger. You have given wings for your poem to fly! Blessings!
Roger  Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Thank you very much... Yes, Andy was the bird who flew... He gave inspiration to the others...
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