Debjani Mitra Poet Rhyme

The Red Umbrella Hideout

It was a dark wet night...rain over head..
Sheltered us close.....an umbrella red.
Breathing moonlight ....in your silent air.
My eyelids closed ..inside your hug and care.

The fragrance of water ...intoxicating wine.
I was drunken deep... in the fruit of your vine.
Soaking showers trickled...the transcending time .
Redundant words played... a rhyming pantomime.

A kiss smelling vanilla... whispered all untold.
My face cupped inside.....your soft fingered fold.
I quenched my thirst ...in your sea ...submerged.
In the red umbrella hideout....our lips converged.

Did I catch cold in the rain? Or is it  your shiver?
The ripple of your touch? A  wave made me quiver.
Ardent affection .... relieved a fancy dream...
Revealed the reality.....of a  love supreme.


Dated 8th November 2018
Submitted to the Red Umbrella Poetry Contest
Sponsor Eve Roper
PLACED FIRST IN CONTEST

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Jan Allison November 17, 2018 at 1:05 PM you wrote a beautiful poem to accompany the picture Debjani, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Debjani Mitra November 17, 2018 at 10:49 PM Thanks Jan..it's so nice to get the compliment

Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2018 at 11:36 AM - "A kiss smelling vanilla" ... so sweet, Debjani :) - A wonderful winning poem ... congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Debjani Mitra November 17, 2018 at 10:51 PM Thanks Anne Lise...the taste of vanilla is in it's smell... isn't it?

Eve Roper November 13, 2018 at 11:04 PM Thank you for entering my contest, Debjani, you had everything I was looking for. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve Debjani Mitra November 17, 2018 at 11:07 PM It was a pleasure to write on the picture prompt... feeling elated to get the appreciation

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2018 at 4:13 AM - A beautifully described poem from this picture, Debjani :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Debjani Mitra November 8, 2018 at 5:51 AM Thanks so much for the lovely wish.

Tom Cunningham November 8, 2018 at 2:45 AM Lovely verse Debjani. Good luck. Tom Debjani Mitra November 8, 2018 at 3:56 AM Thanks for your praise