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The Red Square Nebula

The word of anger spoken by the square mouth of the dark, an interstellar swear, addressed to who knows whom. A scarlet curse, a four-horned furiousness, which in the journal kept by the apathetic universe looks like an inner breakup, an external candescent flash of light, a red-hot dozen of exclamation points, commas, dots around the supernova which still doesn’t turn into a white dwarf. The terawatts of wrath!.. I wonder what incited your square rage, oh, darkness, in the days of yore. 28.05.2019 Nifty Named Nebula's Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula #7 The Red Square

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Date: 10/26/2019 11:00:00 PM
A very unique interpretation of the contest. I like uniqueness.
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Date: 6/13/2019 10:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kurt.
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Date: 6/12/2019 6:54:00 PM
Kurt, I am so happy to see this wonderful entry on the winner's list! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/12/2019 2:09:00 PM
Kurt, your no-holding-back astute awareness, fascinates all to an edge-of-the-seat moment of wanting more of the same without end, and with that, I would like to add my personal heartfelt thanks for gracing your awesome rendering within this contest that was made possible by the PoetrySoup members, as a place to be solely recognized and honored by its community of fellow poets, Aloha always, William Kekaula
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Date: 6/12/2019 1:22:00 AM
A powerful piece that glows red hot with passion. "The terawatts of wrath". This has such brilliance Kurt! I hope it is a top winner! I loved it! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/29/2019 8:03:00 PM
I'm sure mankind incited it! This is awesome, Andrea's words, I know, but I concur. You have a vivid imagination that benefits all who read you and a creative streak that lends it such great umph! I don't know what to write for this nebula's contest but at least from you, I have garnered a fraction of a bit of an idea. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/30/2019 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay. I must confess, your words sound very pleasant for my blushed ears. I am glad that my modest poetry could become a catalyst for ideas for such a wonderful poet like you)
Date: 5/28/2019 9:09:00 PM
You captured my imagination with the passion, the imagery, the artistry and the poetic phrasing of your awe-inspiring poem, Kurt. Brilliant poetry! Your talent sparkles in this spectacular piece. A fav! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/29/2019 4:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan. The sparkling talent bows to you. Million rays of love)
Date: 5/28/2019 6:05:00 PM
wow, That was awesome!!! i liked the eye of God and the horsehead. Already wrote (but not posted mine) but I think yours was a better job!!
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/29/2019 4:15:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Good luck in contest. I bet your nebulae will overshadow mine)

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