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The Red Parasol

Oh shaded beauty on the beach
who brings such classic elegance  
your lovely smile puts yonder lighthouse in the shade

such exquisite beauty sat beside the sea
so picture perfect , so resplendent in pink
Oh shaded beauty on the beach

such delightful poise and so pleasing to the eye 
such natural beauty so bewitched am I !
your lovely smile puts yonder lighthouse in the shade 

like  the fabled mermaid siren she draws me   
no parasol can possibly shade such a vision as she
Oh shaded beauty on the beach

this blooming English rose besides the sea  
a creature of the purest beauty
your lovely smile puts yonder lighthouse in the shade
 
the lady with the parasol sat by the sea
now if only you would see how much I wish you would marry me 
Oh shaded beauty on the beach
your lovely smile puts yonder lighthouse in the shade 


form villanelle as described on poetry soup 
Definition
A 19-line poem consisting of five tercets and a final quatrain on two rhymes. The first and third lines of the first tercet repeat alternately as a refrain closing the succeeding stanzas and joined as the final couplet of the quatrain.
comp entry 14062016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gibson Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement, Stephen. Well done.
Pennell  Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:53 AM
many thanks for your remarks stephen x
Roper Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 11:55 PM
Stephen, this is such a beautiful poem congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
Pennell  Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 2:41 AM
many thanks eve made my day , thanks for the win stephen x
Hoffman Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Very nice and charming poem Stephen!:)
Pennell  Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 1:21 AM
thank you cheryl thanks for taking time to read it stephen
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