The Red Hibiscus

A red hibiscus bloomed 
In the backyard yesterday
Reminding me of my mother 
And things she used to say.  
Like, “Oh, look at that butterfly
And the color of its wings,” and 
“Don’t you just love this time of year,
It’s so uplifting in the Spring!” 
She would doddle ‘round like a queen without a crown
Admiring all the plants and people living,
Seeing deeper than eyes can see 
Rarely taking but always giving.
She loved plants and seeds of every kind 
From azaleas to zinnia flowers,
And talked to them like family and friends
Any day or nighttime hour.  
Daisies, tulips or marigolds
Roses, or chrysanthemums,
She loved them all, Spring, Summer or Fall
In shade or the open sun.
And there were times I was embarrassed 
By her childlike, effervescent ways,
But in retrospect, I’d give anything
To have just one more day.  
Of hearing her voice speak softly 
Like she did when time stood still, 
“I love the red hibiscus, son, and you,
I always will.
   
© Terrell Martin, 12/14/2024

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 12/22/2024 3:47:00 PM
This is such a lovely write enjoyed reading your poem many blessings
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Terrell Martin
Date: 12/23/2024 6:10:00 AM
Hi Yolanda, thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed it. Blessings to you and yours during these holidays.
Date: 12/16/2024 1:34:00 PM
very touching, terrell! perfect ending!
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Terrell Martin
Date: 12/17/2024 6:36:00 AM
Hello again Ilene! You've surprised me once again with your kind and expeditious response to another one of my less than perfect poems. But my mother truly was the nearest person to a saint I've ever met and nothing I can write will ever serve the kind of praise, thanks and justice she so rightly deserves. Thanks again my poetic friend.
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