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The Red Hibiscus

A red hibiscus bloomed In the backyard yesterday Reminding me of my mother And things she used to say. Like, “Oh, look at that butterfly And the color of its wings,” and “Don’t you just love this time of year, It’s so uplifting in the Spring!” She would doddle ‘round like a queen without a crown Admiring all the plants and people living, Seeing deeper than eyes can see Rarely taking but always giving. She loved plants and seeds of every kind From azaleas to zinnia flowers, And talked to them like family and friends Any day or nighttime hour. Daisies, tulips or marigolds Roses, or chrysanthemums, She loved them all, Spring, Summer or Fall In shade or the open sun. And there were times I was embarrassed By her childlike, effervescent ways, But in retrospect, I’d give anything To have just one more day. Of hearing her voice speak softly Like she did when time stood still, “I love the red hibiscus, son, and you, I always will. © Terrell Martin, 12/14/2024

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Date: 12/22/2024 3:47:00 PM
This is such a lovely write enjoyed reading your poem many blessings
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Terrell Martin
Date: 12/23/2024 6:10:00 AM
Hi Yolanda, thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed it. Blessings to you and yours during these holidays.
Date: 12/16/2024 1:34:00 PM
very touching, terrell! perfect ending!
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Date: 12/17/2024 6:36:00 AM
Hello again Ilene! You've surprised me once again with your kind and expeditious response to another one of my less than perfect poems. But my mother truly was the nearest person to a saint I've ever met and nothing I can write will ever serve the kind of praise, thanks and justice she so rightly deserves. Thanks again my poetic friend.

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