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The Red End

My name is Mathias Cruz no matter who you are,you obey the rules i always hope to see that day with their hopes and lives they would pay regardless your momentum,bravery and even rank when you are in the war zone your mind is blank the order is to kill blood thirsty,your motto..,claim life with a heart of zeal Move,move,move,the count moving diagonally toward the mount "Bishop,bishop,do u copy, climbing is hard the mount is sloopy" Oh!Christ..........(cruz)...WH?AT(bishop) "this guys are huge,they could weigh a 1000 pounds i'm out of bits got only twelve rounds" (cruz) "Bishop,bishop we lost calvary,send re-enforcement now this *****has to end here and i will neva back down "(cruz) tra,tra!,tow gone,ten to go whos gonna take the final blow (Guns rattle)****!,six gone 4 more like video game i play "BLUR" Arrg!a shot to my arm No,i wouldn't die this wayno way,this is the gland slam "Alpha,alpha,are u there"(Avatar) keep pushing,you are almost nearAv....(moans)avatar,i got shot and i"m outta touch . "Alpha alpha area taken targets on his way ****!(God forsaken) "(avatar) targets down,targets down(Heart thumps)finally,my mission has ended Aid workers touch ground,their beds descended painful groans,sore eyes,briused face and silent moans i am a legend, the battle fierce,though ended it was my day,"THE RED END"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/8/2016 12:02:00 AM
Ayo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2016 3:20:00 PM
Hello Ayo Okpaku, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing --SKAT .
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