The Red End

My name is Mathias Cruz
 no matter who you are,you obey the rules
 i always hope to see that day
with their hopes and lives they would pay
 regardless your momentum,bravery and even rank
 when you are in the war zone your mind is blank
 the order is to kill
 blood thirsty,your motto..,claim life with a heart of zeal
 Move,move,move,the count
 moving diagonally toward the mount
"Bishop,bishop,do u copy,
 climbing is hard the mount is sloopy"
Oh!Christ..........(cruz)...WH?AT(bishop) "this guys are huge,they could weigh a 1000 pounds
 i'm out of bits got only twelve rounds"
(cruz) "Bishop,bishop we lost calvary,send re-enforcement now 
this *****has to end here and i will neva back down
"(cruz) tra,tra!,tow gone,ten to go
 whos gonna take the final blow
 (Guns rattle)****!,six gone 4 more like video game i play "BLUR" Arrg!a shot to my arm 
No,i wouldn't die this wayno way,this is the gland slam
 "Alpha,alpha,are u there"(Avatar) keep pushing,you are almost nearAv....(moans)avatar,i got shot
 and i"m outta touch
. "Alpha alpha area taken
 targets on his way ****!(God forsaken)
"(avatar) targets down,targets down(Heart thumps)finally,my mission has ended
 Aid workers touch ground,their beds descended
 painful groans,sore eyes,briused face and silent moans i am a legend,
the battle fierce,though ended it was my day,"THE RED END"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 26, 2024 at 8:12 PM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 8, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Ayo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 10, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Hello Ayo Okpaku, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing --SKAT .
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