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The Red Brick

A bridge prepared to celebrate Arrival of your brick today You get your brick secure it high Then move the brick along your way The bridge ahead unseen so far You enter soon a modern town At first your brick cannot pass through You settle in like broken down Encumbered in the modern town Distracted clowns subsuming The bridge to nowhere never found Your progress not resuming What happens to your brick you ask? The worker failed to finish task The brick a relic from the past Left on the ground to linger September 29, 2019

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Date: 11/26/2019 2:46:00 PM
Hello Fred Jagenberg, I just read this poem and it looks like to me- that someone for got to finish the job. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/27/2019 1:48:00 PM
You are welcome my friend.Fred Jagenberg.
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Fred Jagenberg
Date: 11/26/2019 4:49:00 PM
Hello Darlene. Yes we all have more work to do here. Thanks for reading my works and for all your kind comments.
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Fred Jagenberg
Date: 11/26/2019 4:49:00 PM
Hello Darlene. Yes we all have more work to do here. Thanks for reading my works and for all your kind comments.

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