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The Red Brick

A bridge prepared to celebrate
Arrival of your brick today
You get your brick secure it high
Then move the brick along your way

The bridge ahead unseen so far 
You enter soon a modern town
At first your brick cannot pass through
You settle in like broken down

Encumbered in the modern town
Distracted clowns subsuming
The bridge to nowhere never found 
Your progress not resuming

What happens to your brick you ask?
The worker failed to finish task
The brick a relic from the past
Left on the ground to linger

September 29, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/26/2019 2:46:00 PM
Hello Fred Jagenberg, I just read this poem and it looks like to me- that someone for got to finish the job. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/27/2019 1:48:00 PM
You are welcome my friend.Fred Jagenberg.
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Fred Jagenberg
Date: 11/26/2019 4:49:00 PM
Hello Darlene. Yes we all have more work to do here. Thanks for reading my works and for all your kind comments.
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Fred Jagenberg
Date: 11/26/2019 4:49:00 PM
Hello Darlene. Yes we all have more work to do here. Thanks for reading my works and for all your kind comments.

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