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The Realm of Rhyme and Rhythm

Ooh I'm in love with poems that rhyme Poems enrapture by their tuneful chime. Ah hickory dickory dock It's fun to see poems roll n rock. Poems with a merry, cheery catchy tune whisk me into that classic poetic boon Poems embroidered with melody send me forth into rhapsody Just try your voicebox at a sing-a-long and watch a poem go ping pong, ding dong. Ah, it's poems with a funky beat that are to me such a poetic treat They are the ones that have swept me off my feet. Bouncy rhythms in rhyming verse could be enjoyed even if they be a rant or terse. I enjoy poems which bear those vivid rich tones they'd even make ringtones for my cell-phones. Poetic stanzas that have excellent symmetry are my weakness in the realm of poetry. Admirable is a well-structured rhyme scheme provided you don't upset or stray from your theme. Even silly nonsense rhymes give me a reader's thrill and fun but meaninful rhyming ones are ofcourse a bonus as they make a two-in -one. Ah poems with an astute rhythmic flow are the ones for which you can take a bow For no Dinars, dirhams or dime do I sell my rhythm and buy your rhyme. If you rhyme and write in meter you can be sure I'll be your reader. HAPPY RHYMING, CHIMING. And jingle bells sing ring.

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Patrick Farley Iv

Date: 4/12/2016 1:09:00 AM

I loved this up beat poem! I had a beat going as i read it aloud!

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 10/30/2015 12:48:00 AM

I do write diffrnt forms bt my favt is rhyme .Rhyme n rhythm is a vry close connection., And indeed a melodious poetic variation..... My love n regards to rhytm and rhyme....

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry

Date: 9/7/2015 10:40:00 PM

very perfectly written. Rhymes portryed in very delicate way. Love to see if you write more.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/17/2015 10:47:00 PM

I write in many forms, but rhyming in any form will always be my favorite... You are so great at it, my friend. I really enjoyed this creative work! Well done!

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/25/2015 9:09:00 AM

I could not agree more! You write a fetchy, catchy score Fair weather, great clime any 'ole time its fine with rhyme. A7, love your fine poem! Glad I read , I took the time with cell phones now, who needs a dime..lol

Hudhaifah Siyad

Date: 3/27/2015 2:45:00 AM

Aww wow, this is so good, swinging back'n'forth while reading. I love this piece Zaynub, Manshaalah. Keep up the spirit.

Robert Nehls

Date: 3/26/2015 8:33:00 AM

Very well said S.zaynub. This one was a joy to read and expressed many of the reasons that I too love to read the rhyming poems. The ones that sing to the heart and can be felt as you dance to the rhythm. Very nice my friend..... Robert.

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 3/15/2015 5:32:00 AM

This goes for me too

Hasan Javed

Date: 1/25/2015 8:42:00 AM

Nice rhyming.....liked it

Hina Nasir

Date: 1/21/2015 11:36:00 AM

Nicely expressed your inclination for rhym ..plus vry nice rhym itself in this poem, though i dont really feel the same for rhym but what comes more naturally ,in any form

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 12/27/2014 6:40:00 AM

I feel very much the same way, but could never have said it better SZ

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/27/2014 7:30:00 AM

Tnx very much jerry, cheers.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2014 6:30:00 AM

Love your message in this write, Zaynub (is that your name?). I do write in free verse, at times, but nothing beats a well metered poem with rhyme. Have a nice day. // paul

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/27/2014 7:27:00 AM

Many thnx paul, i like to read nice freeverse too, i know u are good at both sir. S stands for my heirloom like ancestral title 'Sayyedah' and yes zaynab is my name. Tnx n regards.

Rosemarie Rowley

Date: 12/27/2014 6:05:00 AM

This is a great poem on the importance of rhyme in poetry, as you put it, it's two in one, I love poems that rhyme, too, because otherwise you risk it just being prose, all good wishes for your work Rosemarie Rowley

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/27/2014 7:33:00 AM

Warm thanx rosemary, u r right freeverse leans towards prose. Take care,

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/27/2014 6:43:00 AM

"Risk" being Prose, We don't want that, I love it Rosemarie

Louis Spence

Date: 12/27/2014 5:09:00 AM

BOOM! BOOM! A poem of joy and laughter. Well done, mon ami. Very uplifting on this cold wintry day.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/27/2014 7:31:00 AM

Thanx for feedback louis, cheers.