S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Poet Rhyme

The Realm of Rhyme and Rhythm

Ooh I'm in love with poems that rhyme
Poems enrapture by their tuneful chime.

Ah hickory dickory dock
It's fun to see poems roll n rock.

Poems with a merry, cheery catchy tune
whisk me into that classic poetic boon

Poems embroidered with melody
send me forth into rhapsody

Just try your voicebox at a sing-a-long
and watch a poem go ping pong, ding dong.

Ah, it's poems with a funky beat
that are to me such a poetic treat
They are the ones that have 
swept me off my feet.

Bouncy rhythms in rhyming verse
could be enjoyed even if they be a rant or terse.

I enjoy poems which bear those vivid rich tones
they'd even make ringtones for my cell-phones.

Poetic stanzas that have excellent symmetry
are my weakness in the realm of poetry.

Admirable is a well-structured rhyme scheme
provided you don't upset or stray from your theme.

Even silly nonsense rhymes give me a reader's thrill and fun
but meaninful rhyming ones
are ofcourse a bonus
as they make a two-in -one.

Ah poems with an astute rhythmic flow
are the ones for which you can take a bow
For no Dinars, dirhams or dime
do I sell my rhythm and buy your rhyme.

If you rhyme and write in meter
you can be sure I'll be your reader.
HAPPY RHYMING, CHIMING. 
And jingle bells sing ring.

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Patrick Farley Iv April 12, 2016 at 1:09 AM I loved this up beat poem! I had a beat going as i read it aloud!

Rizwana Bhurani October 30, 2015 at 12:48 AM I do write diffrnt forms bt my favt is rhyme .Rhyme n rhythm is a vry close connection., And indeed a melodious poetic variation..... My love n regards to rhytm and rhyme....

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry September 7, 2015 at 10:40 PM very perfectly written. Rhymes portryed in very delicate way. Love to see if you write more.

Kelly Deschler May 17, 2015 at 10:47 PM I write in many forms, but rhyming in any form will always be my favorite... You are so great at it, my friend. I really enjoyed this creative work! Well done!

Robert Lindley April 25, 2015 at 9:09 AM I could not agree more! You write a fetchy, catchy score Fair weather, great clime any 'ole time its fine with rhyme. A7, love your fine poem! Glad I read , I took the time with cell phones now, who needs a dime..lol

Hudhaifah Siyad March 27, 2015 at 2:45 AM Aww wow, this is so good, swinging back'n'forth while reading. I love this piece Zaynub, Manshaalah. Keep up the spirit.

Robert Nehls March 26, 2015 at 8:33 AM Very well said S.zaynub. This one was a joy to read and expressed many of the reasons that I too love to read the rhyming poems. The ones that sing to the heart and can be felt as you dance to the rhythm. Very nice my friend..... Robert.

Jerry T Curtis March 15, 2015 at 5:32 AM This goes for me too

Hasan Javed January 25, 2015 at 8:42 AM Nice rhyming.....liked it

Hina Nasir January 21, 2015 at 11:36 AM Nicely expressed your inclination for rhym ..plus vry nice rhym itself in this poem, though i dont really feel the same for rhym but what comes more naturally ,in any form

Jerry T Curtis December 27, 2014 at 6:40 AM I feel very much the same way, but could never have said it better SZ S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri December 27, 2014 at 7:30 AM Tnx very much jerry, cheers.

Paul Callus December 27, 2014 at 6:30 AM Love your message in this write, Zaynub (is that your name?). I do write in free verse, at times, but nothing beats a well metered poem with rhyme. Have a nice day. // paul S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri December 27, 2014 at 7:27 AM Many thnx paul, i like to read nice freeverse too, i know u are good at both sir. S stands for my heirloom like ancestral title 'Sayyedah' and yes zaynab is my name. Tnx n regards.

Rosemarie Rowley December 27, 2014 at 6:05 AM This is a great poem on the importance of rhyme in poetry, as you put it, it's two in one, I love poems that rhyme, too, because otherwise you risk it just being prose, all good wishes for your work Rosemarie Rowley S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri December 27, 2014 at 7:33 AM Warm thanx rosemary, u r right freeverse leans towards prose. Take care, Jerry T Curtis December 27, 2014 at 6:43 AM "Risk" being Prose, We don't want that, I love it Rosemarie

Louis Spence December 27, 2014 at 5:09 AM BOOM! BOOM! A poem of joy and laughter. Well done, mon ami. Very uplifting on this cold wintry day. S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri December 27, 2014 at 7:31 AM Thanx for feedback louis, cheers.

Eve Roper December 26, 2014 at 1:52 PM 7 What a wonderful rhyming poem , I would love to hear more. Blessings to you S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri December 27, 2014 at 1:33 AM Warmest tnx eve,

John Fleming December 26, 2014 at 1:07 PM MY sentiments exactly, Mr Kamoonpuri! Enjoyable read. :) john. S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri December 26, 2014 at 1:49 PM Aw hi thanx soo muchbut im not a Mr. I am a lady poetess. Mery xmas.