The Real Ones To Be Pitied

thinks to end his life
stands on the edge of the ledge
hearing, jump, jump, jump
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 4, 2010 at 9:57 AM
wow,, a well pictured write,,..p.d.
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