Notes About The Poem

 

A rhymes - is, bliss, Adonis, kiss, miss

B rhymes -  tragic, magic

C Kings

D Truths

R Human nature crave for what unreal gave

R for what unreal gave, Human nature crave

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Emile Pinet sponsored

written 6/07/2024

11 syllables each line checked as advices

the real and the unreal

A poet paints a leaf greener than it is,
a dramatist makes the story more tragic,
human nature crave for what unreal gave,
ignores reality that may hold more bliss,
those large white marble sculptures of long lost kings,
are carved to perfection to look Adonis,
because a lie often earns more wealth than truth,
there is money behind every Judas kiss,
pretending gurus con people through magic,
for what unreal gave, human nature crave,
stay with the real, give false pretences a miss.
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Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 6:01 PM
Well done and excellent message in this poem
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 9:02 PM
Wow! Thanks Andrea!! I realise, many live their entire life in a delusional state! :)
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