The Rays of the Sun

The rays of the sun
kick off the vaporation
of stagnant water.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Thompson Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 6:11 PM
This is an interesting poem Cornel. Enjoyed reading it. TFS Take care my friend, Jess :)
Cornelius  Chidera  Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 6:23 PM
THANKS for your reading and comment JESS
A   Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Cornel, thank you for the second thought of this poem...
A   Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Cornel, a great imagery, Down here in Texas, we don't enjoy rays and effect what evaporation can do....Love this..Linda
Cornelius  Chidera  Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:03 AM
THANKS for your reading and comment Linda. High sunshine sometimes seem to be of no good.
Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Hi, Cornel. I enjoyed seeing this poem. Maybe I will take one quick look at one more before I go off here for the afternoon!
Cornelius  Chidera  Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 6:01 PM
thanks for your reading and comment, HAIKU is always among my favorite
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