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The Ravin'

it started with a ramble words to self spoken then came a tapping windows blown open starting to rant with a sonorous bird voice that shant keep me talking of love and loss without me starting to rave on and on and on for evermore

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Date: 6/21/2019 11:15:00 AM
I freak'n love this piece. Brilliant, evocative, a fave. x
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/21/2019 8:54:00 PM
I'm sure it would rip me a new one, but only to enhance the depth and understanding of this piece.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/21/2019 6:15:00 PM
If you ever catch me on a real ramble and rave you might not think that way Maureen jajaja.

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