The Ravin'

it started
with a ramble
words to self spoken
then came
a tapping
windows
blown open
starting to rant
with a sonorous
bird voice
that shant
keep me
talking
of love
and loss
without me
starting to rave on
and on and on
for evermore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 11:15 AM
I freak'n love this piece. Brilliant, evocative, a fave. x
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 8:54 PM
I'm sure it would rip me a new one, but only to enhance the depth and understanding of this piece.
Connelly Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:15 PM
If you ever catch me on a real ramble and rave you might not think that way Maureen jajaja.
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