Timothy Mcguire Poet Rhyme

The Ravens Wait

Nevermore talking
Ravens perched and wait for me
Nevermore walking
To carry me off to my eternity
Over to the land of the shadow
Across the dark river I go

Sample #5
GIF 2 Your Best Anything Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: William Kekaula
3/24/20

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Gershon Wolf October 4, 2019 at 1:34 PM And off you went to the winner's circle, Timothy! Congrats on your trophy win in the contest! ~ Evermore! Timothy Mcguire October 4, 2019 at 3:58 PM Thanks Gershon!

Joseph May October 3, 2019 at 9:20 PM Nicely written Timothy, Congrats on your win.. Timothy Mcguire October 3, 2019 at 11:24 PM Thanks for inspiring me with your photo and contest Joseph

Line Gauthier September 29, 2019 at 8:19 PM Love this dark piece, Timothy. Lovely rhythm. Timothy Mcguire October 8, 2019 at 8:39 PM Thank you Line, your opinion is important and means a lot to me.

P.S. Awtry September 29, 2019 at 5:27 PM love the "nevermore"s. Well done! :) Timothy Mcguire October 8, 2019 at 8:40 PM Thank you for noticing PS! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 28, 2019 at 6:30 AM Ooh, I don't know what the contest is but this piece has captivated me. I like it! Timothy Mcguire September 29, 2019 at 11:41 AM Thank you Maureen, check that contest I'm sure you would do well. You do not write bad poems.

Tom Cunningham September 28, 2019 at 4:25 AM Like it Timothy, hope they have a long wait though. Tom Timothy Mcguire September 29, 2019 at 11:42 AM I agree Tom. :)

Caren Krutsinger September 28, 2019 at 2:03 AM "ravens perched and wait for me" - hilarious, and gives the reader a whole new aspect of the new ravens. Timothy Mcguire September 28, 2019 at 2:11 AM Thank you Caren