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The Ravens Wait

Nevermore talking Ravens perched and wait for me Nevermore walking To carry me off to my eternity Over to the land of the shadow Across the dark river I go Sample #5 GIF 2 Your Best Anything Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula 3/24/20

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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/4/2019 1:34:00 PM
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And off you went to the winner's circle, Timothy! Congrats on your trophy win in the contest! ~ Evermore!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/4/2019 3:58:00 PM
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Thanks Gershon!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/3/2019 9:20:00 PM
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Nicely written Timothy, Congrats on your win..
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/3/2019 11:24:00 PM
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Thanks for inspiring me with your photo and contest Joseph
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2019 8:19:00 PM
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Love this dark piece, Timothy. Lovely rhythm.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/8/2019 8:39:00 PM
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Thank you Line, your opinion is important and means a lot to me.
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 9/29/2019 5:27:00 PM
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love the "nevermore"s. Well done! :)
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/8/2019 8:40:00 PM
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Thank you for noticing PS! :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/28/2019 6:30:00 AM
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Ooh, I don't know what the contest is but this piece has captivated me. I like it!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/29/2019 11:41:00 AM
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Thank you Maureen, check that contest I'm sure you would do well. You do not write bad poems.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/28/2019 4:25:00 AM
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Like it Timothy, hope they have a long wait though. Tom
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/29/2019 11:42:00 AM
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I agree Tom. :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2019 2:03:00 AM
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"ravens perched and wait for me" - hilarious, and gives the reader a whole new aspect of the new ravens.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/28/2019 2:11:00 AM
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Thank you Caren

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