The Raven brings

Ravens bring darkness to the sky shadows cross into the unknown.

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Dave Timperley

Date: 4/10/2017 8:01:00 AM

In England when the ravens flee the Tower England is lost. They are a portend of doom. So says the legend. Good write, short and effective. God Bless. D.

Heather Brearley
Date: 4/10/2017 10:16:00 AM

Wow thank you dave

Cona Adams

Date: 4/9/2017 6:23:00 PM

I love this, Heather. Excellent Haiku.

Heather Brearley
Date: 4/10/2017 10:17:00 AM

Thank you cona

Kathleen Kroll

Date: 4/9/2017 4:53:00 PM

Very nice. Welcome to poetry soup

Brian Duffield

Date: 4/9/2017 4:45:00 PM

After reading some of your poems, particularly like your short imagist poems-they are more suggestive!

Joseph May

Date: 3/4/2017 4:10:00 PM

Very nice haiku Heather..best wishes

Heather Brearley
Date: 3/4/2017 4:18:00 PM

Thank you joseph!