The Raven

On a dark, gloomy, depressing winter night
Something came that was to be such a sight
On my very life's blood it could surely draw
In it's black hole eyes i knew what it saw
Striving for  analytical logic
Fighting man yearning for the nostalgic

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Black, Gothic,  arcane the Raven
Death, delphic,  cold his haven

Looking me deep in my own very soul
The Raven said I can hear  calm deaths toll
The nation is  a decaying cadaver
Falling gray ashes from the disaster
A gasp my destiny was preordained
Yet so many questions, so much unexplained

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From gray ashes the  nonpareil will rise
From this grim narrative you must grow wise
Growing more somber he began to say
Their will be a great war on this special day
It will be the darkest before the light
But the prophet of death warned you must fight

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He said but  victory can be  achieved
Hearing this I began to feel relieved
But beware he said, anathema will come
Finally I ask sternly where are you from ?
Death gaze he said always remember your martyrs
Finally relenting , I was sent by Allfather


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Reeling from disbelief I asked questions
Why send you to me  with these directions?
He said don't worry as it is not important
You must prepare yourself for the abhorrent
Saying to rise again is not a sin
I ask his name he responded..... Munin

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April 25, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Super 7 on this one my friend. Great and very creative writing!!!!
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April 27, 2015 at 11:52 AM
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March 29, 2015 at 10:15 PM
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March 17, 2015 at 9:48 PM
I'm a little late, but here I am, Robert , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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March 24, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Thank you for the kind words.
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March 16, 2015 at 12:16 AM
ROBERT, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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March 15, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Robert:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Robert, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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March 18, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Thank you for the kind words. I hope you enjoy my stuff.
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