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The Rational Wolf

Rationale rationed sparingly Teetering on borrowed sanity Logical minds toppling over Betrayal finding four leaf clover No Know faith is found willingly Heaven's answer is filling free But cold denied hearts beat out of tune Fed from a mind of silvered spoon Rational people come along then While hell opens a big churly grin Fraid to fly higher from its gaping maw Run to the flock, wolf shall come call Knock knock...

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/31/2012 6:36:00 PM

Intriguing poem here. Always, Laura

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/30/2012 4:35:00 PM

brilliant poem with a message, so profound, enjoyed.

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 8/29/2012 6:46:00 PM

I really enjoyed this poem! Hugs - Laila

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2012 11:27:00 AM

Interesting work..Some propaganda is easily swollowed but hard to digest then one gets sick..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/29/2012 10:02:00 AM

Wonderful verse Tim, reminds me how apathy creeps in when fed with that silver spoon and how wolves in sheep's clothing deceive the unwary. In sofew words you managed to open up so many areas of deceit. Well done my friend! Love, Lizzie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/29/2012 9:56:00 AM

this unique piece treads on the subject of jaded hearts with such agility of words and compelling imagery... well done, cory!..:) huggs!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/27/2012 9:55:00 PM

What a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity you employed within this poem Tim! It's truly a spectacular and delightfully sly write! Perfectly placed piece, Great Work!!