Debbie Guzzi Poet Triolet

The Rain's Came

The early spring rain pounds the earth
washing sleep from the eye of dawn
conducting percussive rebirth.
The early spring rain pounds the earth
bringing the pattering of mirth
as awakened the violets yawn.
The early spring rain pounds the earth
washing sleep from the eye of dawn.

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Debbie Guzzi May 8, 2012 at 7:52 AM yes me too..rainy day LONG NAP!

Joe Maverick May 7, 2012 at 11:37 PM Well i have enjoyed this one Debbie liked the washing sleep from the eye of dawn bit; i can tell you one thing though!! Over here its made the people sleep in.." although not the dawn.."

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2012 at 10:38 AM love that interesting violets yawn!!! soupmail.

Jack Horne May 5, 2012 at 4:02 PM beautiful triolet indeed, debs. Congrats on your wins

Kash Poet May 4, 2012 at 9:36 PM Wow!wonderful!!

Carrie Richards May 4, 2012 at 6:44 PM washing sleep from eye of dawn....(love that line!) :)

Broken Butterfly May 4, 2012 at 6:35 PM Very nice poem Debbie, I love the spring rain, there is something so soothing about it, and thanks for all your great comments on my poetry

Painted Hunter May 4, 2012 at 5:06 PM Very cool, Debbie...very cool. I need to study poetry. I didn't even know what a triolet was. Ha! Mine just come out however and I'm at a loss as to what to call them. A fan-Caleb Smith

John Rhinem May 4, 2012 at 2:29 PM Ps. Smile ˜ "Tis No Secret By Now, My Beautiful Debbie, As Unto How Much I Love You, 'My Beautiful Love.'" *

John Rhinem May 4, 2012 at 2:25 PM Smile ˜ A Pretty & Lovely Poem, By A Very Gifted & Beautiful Woman * I Find More Of The Opportunity Within This Moment To Your Tell Your Beauty, Again ˜ My Beautiful Love, Forever; John!:) ˜