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The Rainbow Needs a New Name

The rainbow needs a new name. What it should be I don’t know. Its name before Babel surely a song. Shimmering, glistening, magical thing! Outlandishly colored, and elusive. Common and yet somehow rare. Momentary, yet ancient. Its power only doubted when hidden. In its presence we are left without words. Brilliant men utter only oohs and aah’s. At times we can’t help but cry because of water vapor? Tiny droplets suspended untethered! Explained and still incomprehensible! Artists paint in vain upon their canvas. Their work trite, opaque and flat, a ridiculous cartoon. If pictures with their renown power fail, how can we tell of the leaping inside? Hint of another realm we all suspect Like joyous recognition! For all this we say, “rainbow.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/14/2019 1:12:00 PM
OK. I get it; I hear you.... And yet,... (soup mail, please). :) gw
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Date: 3/14/2019 11:14:00 PM
I've tried "fixing" this one and just gave up letting it be it's own thing... But, seeing a rainbow really does speak to my soul. (going to read your soupmail right away)
Date: 10/15/2018 11:58:00 AM
I love this poem, a favorite! I wish I could tell you what rainbows mean to me, maybe another time. P.S. keep writing!
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Date: 10/15/2018 12:58:00 PM
I am so glad you like it.

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