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The Rainbow Is Back

Only colorful storms
Shake my ground
Happy rain
Resets my frown
Sun is up
And now I’m smiling
Not upside down
From this air
I inhale 
Bliss
No more dreadful drops of rain
Creating a mist 
of terror 
The sky has matured
No longer gray
But quite a new blue

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Edward Orozco

Date: 6/12/2013 9:21:00 PM

beautiful write Candice. A warm welcome to poretry soup!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2013 2:10:00 PM

You keep that rainbow Candice... don't ever let it fade away or turn gray again. I love the feeling of the bliss in your poem..... your poem was nice to inhale . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/11/2013 12:42:00 PM

- Hi Candice, enjoyable with new members in P-Soup - I will welcome you, and thank you for your first poem. - I hope there will be many more in the future. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Posey

Date: 6/11/2013 8:45:00 AM

Nice work! .. Welcome to PSoup.. Keep it up... you should do well.... Jake

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/11/2013 7:24:00 AM

Those 1st 4 lines hit the hardest. Fantastic!

Candice Jackson
Date: 6/11/2013 7:25:00 AM

thank you!

Skat A

Date: 6/10/2013 8:07:00 PM

This is lovely Candice, a wonderful approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT