The Rain Is a Melody

As the darken night fades and the daylight hour appears
As I wonder hoping the sun will rise soon
The sunlight glistening down after the moon
Instead the melody of the raindrops against the pane
Shattered is the rhythm  of that the rain
This offbeat song that sings off in key
As the sun rises and I open my eyelids
Through the Iris I have a brand new day
Potentially on key the rhythmic tone again and again
Symbolizing the chimes to play that melody
When the rain starts again on the earth triumphantly
That melody plays on and on with each cry from the clouds
Reluctantly in unison freedom from off key
And the joy of love and a new filled day
Broken roles of shattered rhythm on the pane with me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Law Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 5:11 PM
thank you! I am glad you enjoyed . Appreciate the feedback
Davis Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 7:15 PM
this is a very imaginative and creative write. Full of imagery and depth. Nice job
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