The Rain and the Field

-Rain on its color craving
                   to be gray...
               Wets my soil with
                  gray storm...
             - I the one who worships her as a blessing 
               further green i become  ...                                                                                       
              thus spoke the field...!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

De Beaulieu Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 11:54 AM
Hello Alakas, I have never thought of the rain having color. I always thought that rain was a clear color. Rain is a blessings when it pours giving the dry earth water to be green again. Salute my dear friend. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Is is a hard cover book? xxx God Bless.Salute Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:39 AM
Hello Alakas, You published a book! Did you do it in Portuguese or English? Just wondering. Congregational. Is this the first book? Well done my friend. Salute Darlene.
Poetry Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 11:50 AM
Dear Darlene, I just republished the poem love and sex with another title. READ SANS FEAR MY POETRY, also listen to the song that says exactly what I describe...I hope you like it xxxooo God bless you salute alkas
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace