The Rain

The rain smelled different when I was young
Not yet a care, living for fun

I’m no longer young, but not yet old
Responsibility has taken hold

The rain still comes, heavy and light
Awakening my senses to a new height

Still searching for the rain I knew when I was young
Before innocence had come undone

But now that I’ve seen the rain in so many a different place
I fear the rain of my youth has been erased
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beesley Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 8:50 PM
good write read my poem "righteous rain"
A   Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 2:33 PM
well done Dan, enjoyed your poem, thoughts and memory sad things we go thru that mage us forget. Have a nice one,..LeeAnn
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 3:08 PM
Great metaphoric language that you have used in this write..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
Mehta Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 3:40 AM
Nice thoughts well expressed on The Rain
Horsman Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 2:04 AM
it's the little things in life i enjoy, this about rain is as good as it gets, awesome. Harry
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