The Rain

Today was the day I would see the sky.... but the rain messed it up...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Chircop Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Short and Sweet.Loved the story.Hope it stops raining.
Salehi Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Some days are rainy days, but in mine it's always a storm...
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 2:29 PM
Great job with this metaphorical one. Congrats on the winl
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 1:09 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning line, Mark :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Great imagery in just one line Monoku,Mark. Congratulations on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 6:31 AM
Oh disappointment! Congratulations!
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 4:36 AM
You must be somewhere near where I live!! Congrats on your win!!
One Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 2:51 AM
Happens a lot here in the UK! Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Bartolo Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 3:55 AM
Thanks for the second place. I did not expect it :)
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