The Rail

the rail, one inch thick
with a runner of clean snow -
two birds in bare limbs

Nov 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ashley Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:09 AM
Dear Kim, you capture this wintry scene with lovely finesse. Beautiful! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Thank you, dear Susan!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 2:34 AM
Wonderful haiku.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Thanks, Victor! :)
Poet Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 3:24 PM
Great and lovely haiku, Kim. Enjoyed
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 8:50 AM
A chilly winter scene Kim, we're overdue a bad winter here. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 8:52 AM
This final day in Minneapolis- a snow storm. Very pretty though!
Mathews Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 8:32 AM
Lovely, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 8:52 AM
Thank you!
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