The Quiet Rescue

Carry on in your ways.
You will never change me.
Keep your eyes forever closed.
Only your heart can make you see.
Come the tangles through your thoughts.
I'll provide the brush.
Ripping at your mind
Never helped you much.
Give someone your hand,
Rough as it may be,
And hold on to all you get,
Because that gift may make you free.
Don't throw it all away.
It's easier to forgive.
Cry tears for all your pain,
And hope will make you live.
You've locked your door of life
And thrown away the key.
Your soul has shriveled up.
Quiet may you be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Poetess Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 6:27 PM
This goes in my favorites. Thanks for sharing it. Congrats on being on the featured poets list. In Christ's Love
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May 13, 2011 at 4:13 PM
Windyann.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
Fallin Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 12:21 AM
Hi Windyann....You have it right on this one.."you can NOT change anyone"..as far as love goes..they either feel it or they don't...and if they don't set them free quick!....or you might miss the best thang that ever came your way....Great write here!......SugarbearUSA.......:)
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May 11, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on being featured on homepage this week..Sara
Mossburg Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 8:45 AM
I love this. It is so moving. Congratulations on being featured.
Gragg Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Nicely done.
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May 11, 2011 at 6:58 AM
ditto
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May 9, 2011 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Windyann. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 4:27 AM
Congratulations on yor poem being featured this week, Windyann
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